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Blogs > 1Nosferatu > AKA I think i can Write

bliss  

1Nosferatu 50M
2 posts
2/7/2010 10:06 am

Last Read:
2/7/2010 3:02 pm
bliss

so fine
fine line between
innocence and bliss
i don't yet know your
liquid limits
guide me show me
my fingertips
they are wet with
anticipation
the circles of your lips ache
for your curved lines
flesh on flesh on cotton sheets
white how sublime
spreading you apart onto
the blankets
they are a sea of time
waves for me in you see me
see inside those lips
of yours there it is a space
for you to fill full of me
full of me inside you I feel
full of this experience this
sweet romance much like a
masquerade

foxy_nsa_fun 49F

2/7/2010 10:22 am

 Hi,

You are getting much better at this. Bliss is by far the best piece you have posted, although perhaps another draft or two to get the final edit
just
right?

I don't write erotic stuff, but maybe I should start. I'm afraid I tend to be more macabre. To be honest I am a lazy undisciplined writer. I'm going to start blogging and maybe it will help to establish habit.

Keep writing,

Jo
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