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Falling into
Falling into Falling into written July 7th, 2021 always a never a without a face suspended in this twilight no-where and in no-time floating in air my<b> faith </font></b>is the tight grasp keeping you from falling into the abyss where are crushed like fallen fruit— or am I keeping you from falling into grace? |
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One of the pleasures of my strange memory is finding unexpected and unremembered things written in my notebook. This poem is from one of those. I try to heal, myself and parts inside. It is difficult to imagine how to do things differently, and this is stable at least. Alternate ending: or is it grace you would fall into if I let go?
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This is utterly profound Sen. You inspire me with your courage & daring. Pertaining to the two potential endings... I think that the "Alternate ending" reads more in the passive voice... which may work better in this instance? Something to consider, perhaps. Very nice to read you. *. *. *
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boy your words make me think thank you very much
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I like it as presented.. Innocence lost is never found again My name is MrWrong and I approved this comment
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I would not let you fall Cradle you in my arms Cry no more Grow to a woman For get the past It is over Long forgotten The new is ahead of you Step forward reach out I'm standing right in front of you Come into my arm Feel my strength I well not let you fall again Your the sweet fruit from a strong tree Ment to be shared Let yourself go you will see.............
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